First version as an excuse!
Your first version doesn't have the same impact as your final one but the musical arrangement demonstrates an uncanny ability for delivering feeling, images, action through sound. At least I felt it that way. Is there more to the music than this? I would like to see a composition that includes all the sections or raar… or perhaps that wasn’t meant. Either way I’m most amazingly surprised in a good sense with your music. Congrats… though saying this isn’t much.