Very good loop
It is very hard to hear carefully all your stuff because you've submitted a lot (perhaps too much?). Anyway this little loop is a catch... congrats. You're working for all of us
Very good loop
It is very hard to hear carefully all your stuff because you've submitted a lot (perhaps too much?). Anyway this little loop is a catch... congrats. You're working for all of us
still some work to be done
It’s not that well produced… voices lacking… the idea isn’t new but it’s not a bad one… the sound should be more filled... you can improve this alot, and… the worst mistake you could have made… THIS IS NOT DRUM’N’BASE!! Which means that people here will completely trash you… which makes sense. No D'and'B lover whats to see a different style on top ratings right? It's also disrespectful for all the others... but I'm not a D&B composer and I think every new song should get at least one constructive review. Redo it in the right categories. Trust me on this one ok? ;)
Listen up two things...
Ok... It's a nice composition BUT have you ever considered why it's so badly rated?! Personally I have no problems with it BUT I've seen good compositions just go down the drain because of this very simple mistakes. The first is this is not drum'n'base, which means that drum'n'base lovers will be kicking you silly. Second, there's 1 track (intentionally or not) that sounds pretty noisy and that gives the entire song a very unclean dirty look that doesn't suit it (sorry to say but to my ears it's true). Redo it because I think it has quality and try to put it in the right catheg (more of dance or techno probably). Well... there's a 3rd thing but that's really up to u. The leading sounds tend to stand out a lot as they should but create some boredom... play with the bass a little. I'll raise your stats a bit ;)... there's to much garbage already in newgrounds to let some good go to waste “un-noted”.
Heh, you pretty much listed everything I had written down to fix in the remix I'm doing :P Glad to hear from some users that actually know alot about the programs and such and not just random clueless n00bs :D
Nicely done
This isn't my kind of music nor do I think this is the right category, but neither influenced my rating. I think this is a good song for flash production and it is very well built. For that you got my thumbs up vote. Keep making the effort worth while for us listeners.
The voice...
Ok... When the music began I was really expecting something better... then the voice began... then the guitars just got lost... then I just got disappointed. Look, remake that with a normal voice and with all the tempos in the right place. then we will talk;)
I don't know what you mean by "the guitars got lost" and "remake with tempos in the right place". Everything is the way it is because that's the way I planned it. If I thought it was wrong, I would have redone it. Unfortunately, I will not take your advice into serious consideration, but I might submit the un-sped-up version... maybe. Thanks for the review.
Needs lyrics
Hi. Nice work btw: very clean sound, you can groove to the beat and all that crap (no need to be redundant since others have already said the same;). But in my opinion the song becomes dull without variance... that is not good. You can either add new tracks (which I would disapprove) or perhaps vocals (why am I giving you these two options... go for vocals:). The other thing you might have noticed is that this isn't exactly rock... it's something more similar to the electronic scene with a much cheated rock beat. But since that doesn't bother me that much, this review is only based on your work. So, summing up, try to make things more interesting next time cause the basic concept is approved with applauses.
umm.. your confusing lol.. and wth is ''cheated rock beat''
LOLOLOL
I do prefer the original song... Either way It's fun to hear the rock version of magical Trever.
Yeah, who doesn't prefer the original to all the covers. It was fun to do a rock cover of Magical Trevor... (That other one where the guy is pretty much growling the words is disturbing.)
Raar
Just seen the flash. nice of you to put the song for download. Nice loop. You do have an incredible talent. I must say that the more I hear your music the more adicted I'm becoming. Aside from your musical talents, though not separate from them, YOU ARE AN AMAZING PRODUCER!! I mean, the structure of the musics is perfect!!! I can't detect any flaws from what I've heard!
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