Now... the song pleze
as a short loop... eh... it's not that good you know? But the beat started pretty ok (though the snare, cymbal, etc, should have worked a bit more)... Now... if you could show me the full music, that would be great! For now 7/10
wow, oyu have reviewed all of my songs... thanks alot... yeah this is just a bunch of funk chords... nothin special... but again i have a full version with lyrics but i cant put them up for obvious reasons... anyway, thanks alot man, your giving me some useful feedback.
I enjoyed the concept...
This seems to be a bit under rated... It's a short segment but it's pretty smooth... again the solo issue... the bass could be a bit louder... the drums not being filling enough, but it's ok for amateur production. Nice chord choice. Bottom line: I liked it
yeah... this is by far my favorite song (unfortunatly its my bottom rated) but i love the chord progression and it just feels like a good tune... and yeah... the drums are crap because they are just some crappy loop in my software (i have a drummer for gigs though). its a realy hsmae its rated so low... i thought this was better then Cold Duck by far... anyway, went off on a tangent... thanks for the review man, when i get my songs copyrighted ill be sure to let you hear them first...
Just as long as you had some fun...
Like you said... guitar! Can't ask for more can we? cause I'd like some bass and some more work on the solo... but you said it was for fun so I can understand. BTW the drums could be more filling... Rock on baby
hahahaha, yeah, i was just screwing around with my guitar... and i found it to be a fun song to actually produce...
Waiting for 2 things...
Really good! Congrats! But I would suggest two things if I may so bold: vocals... the music really asks for them otherwise it becomes a bit empty; lead guitar needs a brand new solo - you need to show it out: "time for shining"! The end becomes a bit senseless... so, you have a song that can potentialy become fantastic. Keep on rocking ;)
thanks alot man, ive seen you have been following my other songs to... yeah, i have a proper version with vocals etc (im actually a singer but i just write my own songs) but i dont want to loose my rights to it by putting it on NG... anyway thatnks for the review
Explaining...
I was inclined to give you less (yes... me from my high moral bench!) but just because I keept hearing (and hoping) for a beat that never came... My suggestion? well... I kept hearing "smack my bitch up" (PRODIGY; FAT OF THE LAND) beat/bass all over the song... I liked the sound a lot!!! REALLY A LOT!! I'll give you a 5/5 because I think the loop was ok (for a loop that is... and useful too) but because I want a full song, you hear? ;) Cheers
I kinda based this off of how Phantasy Star Online has their character creation loop, there's no climax so you don't realize that it's looping and doesn't get repetitive for awhile.
I might make something full out of this later, who knows
Let's aim for 10
You played the bass very inteligently... Globaly the song is pretty well built. There's one thing that always bothers me (but I think that's just me): most of the users here in newgrounds always use similar sounds fonts... From what I've heard you try to very a bit... I would advise you to go even further and try to elevate your songs to something really original. I trust you to be the kind of guy who can actually pull it out. Good luck
my pleasure, I've been playing around with stuff lately making some new kickers and hats since I lost most of the packed sfx that came with fl, so I'll probably be making some more diverse drumlines and stuff.
thanks for the review!
I dunno....
I don't think I'll be adding that much new but here it goes: clean sounds, fantastic sequence of drum and backg leading guitar... simple and clean that's the trick! Now comes the bad part... what will happen to the music when you'll add the lyrics?!! See what I mean? Anyway, this was the 1st song I ever heard from you so my congrats. Those are very good in deed (unlike some trashy heavy with no quality at all.. nice composition btw=) so 4now (will I let think about the lyrics) 5/5
WHen this gets lyrics, its going to kick you in the face, kick you in the balls, rape your family and have you begging for mercy!!! Thats how good the song will be when it gets lyrics. Thanks for the review man. \m/
Listen up two things...
Ok... It's a nice composition BUT have you ever considered why it's so badly rated?! Personally I have no problems with it BUT I've seen good compositions just go down the drain because of this very simple mistakes. The first is this is not drum'n'base, which means that drum'n'base lovers will be kicking you silly. Second, there's 1 track (intentionally or not) that sounds pretty noisy and that gives the entire song a very unclean dirty look that doesn't suit it (sorry to say but to my ears it's true). Redo it because I think it has quality and try to put it in the right catheg (more of dance or techno probably). Well... there's a 3rd thing but that's really up to u. The leading sounds tend to stand out a lot as they should but create some boredom... play with the bass a little. I'll raise your stats a bit ;)... there's to much garbage already in newgrounds to let some good go to waste “un-noted”.
Heh, you pretty much listed everything I had written down to fix in the remix I'm doing :P Glad to hear from some users that actually know alot about the programs and such and not just random clueless n00bs :D
The voice...
Ok... When the music began I was really expecting something better... then the voice began... then the guitars just got lost... then I just got disappointed. Look, remake that with a normal voice and with all the tempos in the right place. then we will talk;)
I don't know what you mean by "the guitars got lost" and "remake with tempos in the right place". Everything is the way it is because that's the way I planned it. If I thought it was wrong, I would have redone it. Unfortunately, I will not take your advice into serious consideration, but I might submit the un-sped-up version... maybe. Thanks for the review.
Needs lyrics
Hi. Nice work btw: very clean sound, you can groove to the beat and all that crap (no need to be redundant since others have already said the same;). But in my opinion the song becomes dull without variance... that is not good. You can either add new tracks (which I would disapprove) or perhaps vocals (why am I giving you these two options... go for vocals:). The other thing you might have noticed is that this isn't exactly rock... it's something more similar to the electronic scene with a much cheated rock beat. But since that doesn't bother me that much, this review is only based on your work. So, summing up, try to make things more interesting next time cause the basic concept is approved with applauses.
umm.. your confusing lol.. and wth is ''cheated rock beat''
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